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What is the meaning of the seven deadly sins, and how it relates to medieval Christianity?

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Title: Lust
Author(s): Liam Farrell
Source: BMJ: British Medical Journal, Vol. 313, No. 7072 (Dec. 21 - 28, 1996),
p. 1592
Publisher(s): BMJ Publishing Group
Stable URL: http://www.jstor.org/stable/29733869

2.
Title: Envy
Author(s): Louis Appleby
Source: BMJ: British Medical Journal, Vol. 313, No. 7072 (Dec. 21 - 28, 1996),
pp. 1592-1593
Publisher(s): BMJ Publishing Group
Stable URL: http://www.jstor.org/stable/29733870

3.Title: PrideAuthor(s): Simon Wessely Source: BMJ: British Medical Journal, Vol. 313, No. 7072 (Dec. 21 - 28, 1996), pp. 1594-1595Publisher(s): BMJ Publishing Group Stable URL: http://www.jstor.org/stable/29733872

4.Title: GluttonyAuthor(s): John Garrow Source: BMJ: British Medical Journal, Vol. 313, No. 7072 (Dec. 21 - 28, 1996), pp. 1595-1596Publisher(s): BMJ Publishing Group Stable URL: http://www.jstor.org/stable/29733873

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Title: Wrath
Author(s): Simon Chapman
Source: BMJ: British Medical Journal, Vol. 313, No. 7072 (Dec. 21 - 28, 1996),
pp. 1593-1594
Publisher(s): BMJ Publishing Group
Stable URL: http://www.jstor.org/stable/29733871

6.
Title: Greed
Author(s): Ralph Crawshaw
Source: BMJ: British Medical Journal, Vol. 313, No. 7072 (Dec. 21 - 28, 1996),
pp. 1596-1597
Publisher(s): BMJ Publishing Group
Stable URL: http://www.jstor.org/stable/29733875

7.
Title: Sloth
Author(s): James McCormick
Source: BMJ: British Medical Journal, Vol. 313, No. 7072 (Dec. 21 - 28, 1996),
p. 1596
Publisher(s): BMJ Publishing Group
Stable URL: http://www.jstor.org/stable/29733874


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In the Garden of Evil: The Vices and Culture in the Middle Ages. Edited by Richard Newhauser. Toronto: Pontifical Institute of Medieval Studies

http://www.hieronymus-bosch.org/Tabletop-of-the-Seven-Deadly-Sins-and-the-Four-Last-Things,-(detail-of-The-Eye-of-God-which-Sees-the-Committing-of-the-Seven-Deadly-Sins).html

Seven Deadly Sins - world, body, life, history, person, human, Historical Perspective, Influence of the Seven Deadly Sins http://www.deathreference.com/Py-Se/Seven-Deadly-Sins.html#ixzz1IlmqkhuL


Anaysis #1
I think you did a good job of defining the 7 deadly sins. I do think that the basic definitions could have been quoted from the original source and then you could have expounded in your own words about the meaning of that sin and used it as an opportunity to build your argument. The argument could have had more support instead of just stating it. There were a couple of run on sentences where periods should have been used instead of commas. The incorrect syntax made it a little confusing to read at times. This also made the author’s writing and the context cited distinguishable. Some of the citations in text were not cited correctly. I also saw that the 2 analysis were missing. Overall, I think there was a lot of information about the subject but there was a lack of your voice throughout and strong support of your argument.